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(Author note: in case any ladies were curious)
Published on May 6, 2005 By Buddah Moskowitz In
Everyday we meet
in our odd intercourse

I unzip and place my penis
into the porcelain opening
of the urinal

the most profound
compelling evidence of
how men are
systematically disconnected
from themselves.

As boys safe at home
we learn to do it
in comfort
solitude, safety
and privacy
--a first step toward
autonomy--
even smugly locking
the door behind us

but that all changes
when we go to school
and learn to line up
and pee in formation
and more importantly
we learn that to want
privacy and modesty
meant that you were a sissy
--no pun intended.

To be a boy
you just had to
do it
and hurry up because
there’s a line waiting
and any efforts done
with anything less than
a rapid economy of movement
will be taunted by
the braying robotic boys
eager to prove their own
self-alienation.

I’m 42
and I still have to play mental games
with myself
like count the tiles in front of me
or multiply fractions
just to distract myself long enough
to relax
and let my guard down

just to perform the most basic
of living processes

simple elimination.

The urinal remains
unmoved
fixed with a slack jawed
glassy eyed vacant stare
of indifference to my plight.

I dread anyone else
being in the men’s room
because just as with all things
male
it becomes a competition

or worse, a conquest

and worst of all
are the idiots who insist
upon talking to me while they
evacuate.

This is not the time for
male bonding

and I don’t wish to converse
during this most vulnerable moment.

So, to all you ladies
who think we’re lucky
and that the urinal is
such a great modern convenience,
I say
imagine how it would be
if you have to drop your guard
and lower your panties
and sit beside some anonymous female
and trade away your dignity
pretense or defense
just for the privilege
to pee.

As I look around this world
for more toilets with locking doors
and fewer urinals

I make my quiet protest
against the institutionalized
effort to disconnect me from
my body

I have put a wall between
my body and my self
long enough

so I will gladly wait for a stall
and give up my space at the urinal
to someone else

preferably a woman
who complains about long lines
she must endure the ladies’ room.

At least, you have stalls
with doors in there
waiting for you.

And I didn’t even mention
the backsplash.

Comments
on May 06, 2005
Interesting. I gotta say welcome to JU also, a nice break from the politics and whatnot here...
on May 06, 2005
You're not that guy that pees on the public toilet seats are you?

Interesting read.
on May 06, 2005
no, that's me. Love it Buddah. You know i do.

Johnny
on May 09, 2005
I must say, good show! Welcome to JU and all that jazz.

I personally hate urinals, and I'm glad someone else has the same view.

I write a little poetry. You can check my stuff out on http://deathbybeebles.joeuser.com

Peace,

Beebes
on Jan 30, 2007
Wow, I never thought about this.
on Jan 30, 2007
See ladies, that's why there's no lineup for the men's washroom at the movie theatre.
We're thinking:
Get in. Do it. Get out.
Or better still, hold it till you get home!

always fun Buddah - I'm enjoying your book
on Jan 31, 2007
always fun Buddah - I'm enjoying your book


Dr. Donald --
Were you the one who bought my book a week ago? If so, thanks so much!
on Jan 31, 2007
yup pdf - i'm cheap - great value