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Published on September 15, 2006 By Buddah Moskowitz In Poetry
The veterans have been married too long

they always remind us
that we’re newlyweds
like our marriage isn’t real

Our married friends
sometimes seem like adversaries
who sleep together

they speak in shades of disdain
with their “humorous” faux insults

“She never gives me any”
“He never puts down the seat”

and I know there is a little truth
in every joke

but we don’t say such things
we’ve had our fights
ugly fountains of hateful words
have hissed through our teeth
and we’ve stretched each other’s patience

what married couple hasn’t?

Still the veterans watch us canoodling
with their gently clucking tongues
predicting our fate
“it’ll change, you’ll see”

their trenchant comments about
lazy husbands and frustrated wives
all betray the same disappointment:

“you’re not the person I married”
well, that’s the point
isn’t it?

to be born again everyday
and to discover the world anew
in your partner’s embrace
in your partner’s eyes

we Jews call this
bashert
our destiny

Sometimes I’ll wake before she does
and I’ll see her sleeping:
that sweet peaceful face
safe and sound
and I cannot help but thank God
for this miracle
and just because a miracle happens everyday
doesn’t make it any less of a miracle

this is a world designed
to pull people apart
this world is custom made for
selfishness
and happy is the coupling
that fights and wins that battle
every day

but if the veterans are right
and we do revert into some
pair of bickering old shoes
then I want to go down
swinging with you

my wish is not impossible:

to treat one another kindly
mindful and respectful of
this good fortune
we have found
in each others arms

I hope we continue to be
mistaken for newlyweds

forever.


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Comments
on Sep 22, 2006
This is really a couple of poems. The first ought to end with "what married couple hasn't?" God, can you believe it, an attempt to be constructive. Too funny.

Johnny
on Sep 22, 2006
Thanks for your note. I personally don't like one very much. It's a boring rant. It's basically a fuck you -- not a poem. Did your documentary come out yet?

L'Shanah Tovah from the Unrepentant Jew
on Oct 03, 2006
Finding this a half a month after it was posted proves that the old saying better late than never is a true one. Real nice, Buddha. Really, really nice.
on Oct 04, 2006
Thanks Shov, I wondered if anyone ever read the old posts - I try to read old posts of my favorite writers (of which you're one).
on Oct 04, 2006
I wondered if anyone ever read the old posts


Yes, I try too. Seems like a lot slips by me! But trust me on this, Buddha: I try my damndest to catch all yours!