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Published on February 7, 2007 By Buddah Moskowitz In Poetry
I check around
for poetry on cd

but all I see
are failed rappers
and celebrity wannabees

but I ain’t hip hop
and I ain’t slam
and I ain’t even feelin’
good about
saying ain’t

that’s not me

I’m too old
to be street
and I’m too off-white
to be black
and I’m too brown
to be white
and I have too many
college degrees
and none of them
in creative writing

I have a lovely
home on the hill
with a 30 year
fixed rate mortgage

so where’s my pain?
where’s my street cred?

I wouldn’t even use the
N word
and if I did
I wouldn’t make it plural
by slapping a
Z on the end

but what we have in common
though
is anger

at an unjust system
in the big picture
at feeling invisible
in the heart of our souls

we might all
want you to think we’re
badass noble savages
but be not fooled
by the façade:

it’s more than money

we’re all searching
for validation
a reflection in an audience

a temporary triumph
over the infinite darkness
and the echoing laughter
of the Void:

“Look at me!
See? I matter!”

and as you visit upon
these words

you make me real
for just a moment

and I will most likely
fade away
as you move on the next
poet
failed rapper
or celebrity wannabee.


Comments (Page 1)
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on Feb 07, 2007
This is great Mr. Moskowitz!

You're right, we're all looking for validation somehow, no matter who we are! It seems that nowadays you have to have some street creds but I think that's just baloney! Everyone go through different things in their lives and that alone is enough street creds; at least it should be!
on Feb 08, 2007
Thanks, ForeverSerenity,

As an overweight, middle aged married man, living in the Southern California suburbs, I sometimes feel like I don't have the kind of "cred" needed to be a vital member of the arts community.

My loyal readers (like you) at JU are a great source of validation.
Thanks!
God Bless, Moskowitz
on Feb 08, 2007
we’re all searching
for validation
a reflection in an audience


As far as I'm concerned you've certainly found it with me Buddah.
on Feb 08, 2007
I'm in the audience.

As far as I'm concerned you've certainly found it with me Buddah.


me too.
on Feb 08, 2007
Ah doo feel yo pain brutha.

Keep on holding that candle against that void.
It's my void too.
Avoid the void.
Amazing.
on Feb 08, 2007
Avoid the void.


Or perhaps learn to love it.

(just a thought)
on Feb 08, 2007
     
on Feb 09, 2007
.

And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you.
on Feb 10, 2007
I saw myself there. Precious.
on Feb 10, 2007
Precious.


Ditto Whip! Really beautiful! You've found your muse baby!


(like you) at JU are a great source of validation.


Thx for that warm thought Mr. Moskowitz and you're welcome!
on Feb 11, 2007
btw, happy birthday Buddah M.
It looks good on ya.

~ Don D.
on Feb 12, 2007
Mind if I share one of mine here, Buddah?




Thanks for sharing such a powerful work. The line about "sweet surrender" especially is good.



btw, happy birthday Buddah M.




Thanks for the kind wishes regarding my 17 years of sobriety last Saturday. I celebrated by eating pizza, banana cream pie and watching a dvd of the old Saturday morning cartoon "Fat Albert and the Cosby Kids."
on Feb 12, 2007
And to everyone else, thanks for your loyal readership and your kind wishes.

Moskowitz
on Feb 12, 2007
you've certainly found it with me Buddah


My sentiments exactly... Sorry I didn't see and comment earlier too.

My reflections on the abyss... Mad Max found a little slice of heaven in one, if you've seen 'Thunderdome'. I mean, sure, it was full of feral kids but they could have been mistaken for errant cherubs.
on Feb 25, 2007
Bump~



(because I miss having Buddah Moskowitz around)
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